(;
AB[pp][pn][pj][pd][jd]
AW[dd][dj][dp][nq]
C[ Play the next few moves and rate each successive move as being:
   5  Superlative
   4  Good
   3  Mediocre (or Necessary, e.g., connect against an atari)
   2  Doubtful
   1  Bad

This game is from 3 kyu players.

Source:
    "Do-It-Yourself Commentary Workshop", Ishii Shinzo 9P
    Go World #9, p. 55];
W[pl]
C[Evaluate this move.]
(;
C[White's move here is doubtful.  This invasion has a cramped and narrow feeling.
 
See the variation for a better move, then come back to play the next game move.]
SQ[pl];
B[ql]
C[Evaluate this move.]
(;
C[Black's move here is bad.

See the variation for a much better move, then come back to play the next game move.]
SQ[ql];
W[qk]
C[Evaluate this move.];
C[White's move here is probably necessary.

Play the next game move.]
SQ[qk];
B[qm]
C[Evaluate this move.]
(;
TR[ql]
SQ[qm]
C[Black's move here is doubtful.  Black just backs up the bad triangled stone.

See the variation for a much better move, then come back to play the next game move.];
W[pk]
C[Evaluate this move.];
C[White's move here is necessary to prevent the cut.]
SQ[pk];
B[qj]
C[Evaluate this move.];
TR[pl][pk][qk]
C[Black's move here is bad.  White's marked shape is so strong that even Black's 2 contacting stones from above are not effective.  Black has numerous better alternatives.]
SQ[qj];
W[rk]
C[Evaluate this move.]
(;
C[White's move here is doubtful, and doesn't take full advantage of  Black's thin overall position.

See the variation for a much better move.]
SQ[rk]
)
    (;
    W[rj]
    AE[rk]
    C[White could have severely punished Black's slack moves with this hane.];
    B[ri];W[rl]
    LB[qi:A][qo:B]
    C[Now White threatens the cut at A, and can harass the corner with B.]
    )
)
    (;
    B[pk]
    AE[qm]
    TR[ql]
    C[Black should sacrifice the marked bad play in order to form outside thickness.];
    W[qm];B[pm];W[rl];B[ol];W[qj];B[pi];W[qh]
    LB[jp:A]
    C[Now with the wall on the right, Black should attack from the direction of A.]
    )
)
    (;
    B[ok]
    AE[ql]
    AB[pn]
    TR[pn][pp]
    C[Instead of defending passively, Black should attack here.  Black's marked stones are stronger than White's.];
    W[ol];B[nl];W[om]
    C[If White tries to escape, ...];
    B[np]
    C[... Black has this leaning attack.  White would practically have a lost game already.];
    W[mp];B[no]
    )
)
    (;
    W[jp]
    AE[pl]
    C[The normal move.  White should be trying to take the biggest points, not starting premature fights.]
    )
)

